I was impressed by your Industrial Revolution maps. I would like to see you use the program for Shabanu. What do you think would be a good way to represent the plot to the novel by using INSPIRATION?
Leila said, a timeline so far of what Shabanu has gone through. I think that's a great start. What are your thoughts? What could we add to it? How would you use it?
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hi, this is yonas..
i think that we should do a timeline because it is a good way to understand the plot of the story, like what leils said. it would be fun. the timeline should have pictures that we would draw and it should support whatever we put in the timeline. i think that this is a great idea.
fanta t.
hello well the way we can use inspiration is by maybe making maps and we can also use a timeline like leila said wich is a great idea. we can mpake it detail but short. we can also combinations notes but like not doing each paragraph and summarize but give our opinion of what we read
Senja R.
Well for my idea, we could map out the characters in the story and tell who they are and what there like, and a plot in the story when a problem occurs.
I like Senja's idea, map out each character's timeline. I would ask only for major characters. However, Shabanu is the protagonist, so maybe we should stick with her. However, you could add what happens to other characters because it affects Shabanu.
Yeah i agree with senja's idea
or we could do like every chapter a plot thzt could be good.
But we actually should do a timeline.
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Julia V.
I think that we could do character maps, where we describe maybe 3 characters in detail. Each bubble could be anther thing about them, and we could also put quotes too! I don't know if a complete timeline of the story would be helpful, because people know what happened. Also, i don't know if Inspiration has this, but we could do vendiagrams of different characters to eachother or to yourself!
ciao ciao
Taylor R
Well i love leilas idea. but i think its a little to big.
So we should do the most important things.
I think maybe we could do character maps on all the characters in Shabanu. Then do something different for the plot.
I dont really know what do for the plot maybe a time line or different sections with a map.
Ill think!
johanna b.
I really like leila's idea of a timeline...but what taylor said, I agree, it might be kind of haard of doing it for the hole book. Maybe we can choose a certain process of a really important event, or make a timeline of a certain chapter that we liked.
maybe we can also use inspiration to make a plot too of the main events, not using the bubbles and diagrams because there is a plot you can make too i just discovered.
Hi,
We could do a web of the different main characters and a chain of events that has happened to them during what we read, before the chapter, and after, what we predict will happen to them. To specify, we would have individual webs for each main character that includes what happened to them during the chapter we read, before (like background info), and what we predict will happen to them next.
Rachel
hello.. its me again..(Yonas)
i think that we should make a family tree of all the characters and write how they are significant to the story "Shananu". Then we should write a paragraph on how they are important to the book.
hey, maybe we could use inspiration to do character charts. We would put the person, like Phulan, in the middle, and the write traits and events that happened to Phulan.Such as little bits of info that we dont know and even include pictures we could draw and abel with quotes. Another idea, that I think has already been mentioned is to make a time line of events. since we would have such options with inspiration, mayb we could work in groups to make really detailed interesting projects. We would write the event that has occured and also add pictures and little extra bits of information. Then we could also add info about what people were involved and write why and how they were there. all in all i think inspiration is a fun easy to use software and it has lots of possibilities
hey what i notice that a lot of people want to make a timeline about the novel, but i think most of us know how to make one its quit easy...i think. I'm not saying its a bad idea but were eventually going to be doing what we already know.
what i think we should do is a character view instead of seeing the story in the eyes of Shabanu we see it of Phulan or another character, and we choose a passege of Phulan (or another character) and Shabanu talking to each other.
we know what shabanu is thinking and saying but instead we put down what Phulan might be thinking.
Hi this is leila.
I'm sorry Ms. Olson but what does protagonist mean?
and yonas you spelled my name wrong.
but let get to the point.
I think my idea was ok but we wouldn't really learn anything from it except what happens when and the important parts of the story and timelines are pretty easy to do. So i was thinking we could do like for each chapter we would make a map but putting what happens at the beginning, middle and end of each chapter.
it might take time but at least you get something out of it, and you get to understand the story better for those who don't understand a certain part of the book. I also agree with Senja's idea but you will only be getting out of the book and inspiration map the problems the characters face and you will be getting to know the characters in more detail.
We could do the timeline if people want it more but like what Taylor is saying it would be quite a big project but it doesn't have to be to big you could make it the most detailed timeline and make it big but you could also make a pretty detailed timeline but make it short not too wordy or anything just a simple detailed timeline.
I think we could use inspiration to make maps about every character or every chapter. I also think Leila's idea of a time line is a good idea
nicolas d
well, thank you ms olson for saying that we did a good job! i like leilas idea with a time line, or we could maybe do a web about each chapter ´where we summarize or take the best parts in them
Nicholas i like your idea but it will kind of be long.
This is Semhar on Ajilah's account
I like the idea of a time line but maybe we could do a map or web of how Shabanu has developed throughout the book. Sort of like a before and after but more detailed.
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